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Submitted: October 25, 2009
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Kashi Loveby ~CorneredBaka

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Digital / Other

^{~A fan art of my beloved Kashiyuka from Perfume~}

Well it was suppose to be her but to me it just looks like some random Asian girl with a similar hairstyle...

P.S. If you can't see any details in the hair, try tilting your computer screen...sorry..

P.S.S. Whoa, I just noticed this so it's just a coincidence, but her pose is very similar to

's something like an astronomer Just had to say that<3

Need tips on facial features, specifically the lips, cause I think I should have removed some of the lineart and added more "lips".

Shading also, I need to learn how to create the..uh...uhm..the thing that comes from her nose to the sides of her mouth when she smiles?
Look at a photo of someone smiling, you'll know what I mean~ Anyways, every time I try to make it it ends up looking like wrinkles and she'll look really old.. OTL
And the finger nails, should I have darkened that area or is it fine the way it is?

Oh and does the hand look correct?
I'm quite proud of the hand actually, probably one of the best I've drawn..

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That's all I can think of at the moment but feedback on anything else is much welcomed~<3

^{(11/02/09)E D I T : O M G There's so many comments~! I didn't really have any time to get on dA today so I'll reply back to them as soon as I can~!
Thank you so much for all the feedback everyone~!<3}

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~gdragonlollipoplove Aug 2, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Aww i think it looks nice

*cherriuki Dec 1, 2009 Traditional Artist

wah cute!

~CorneredBaka Dec 5, 2009 Student General Artist

Lol Thanks~!

*cherriuki Dec 8, 2009 Traditional Artist

welcome <3

~NEXUS-2060 Nov 22, 2009

Sorry I can't give any input about correcting this.
I really Love this!! <3
Amazing work!!

~CorneredBaka Nov 23, 2009 Student General Artist

Lol Well thank you anyways, I appreciate the comment and fave~!

~SilverRoseJoker Nov 14, 2009

Hey there!

This is a wonderful drawing! I really like the simplicity in the colors choices. ^__^

Hm..suggestions? (: I'm still progressing myself as an artist so I don't know if you should really listen to any of the following..but maybe next time you could make the highlights a little more noticeable (but not obtrusively so). xD I had to tilt my screen a bit to notice that there were indeed highlights (and very pretty ones at that).

The hand is AMAZINGLY drawn

Nuff said on that one.

As for her lips, they're so pretty, but a little too pale, I think. Add a bit of color to them.. perhaps a soft pink or something? ^__^ Enough to make them stand out, but not snag a person's attention from the rest of the picture.

Hm, last I'd like to say that I like the background. The complementary colors to her green band are nice.

I really like your art style. It's cute :3

~CorneredBaka Nov 23, 2009 Student General Artist

Haha Yeah, the shading and highlights have been pointed out a lot, I failed miserable at them...

I really got to work on my coloring~

But thank you sooo much for the compliments and your feedback~!<3